Thus far my journey has been fast and frequently furious - a series of too-soon starts with sudden stops which can be likened to first attempts at driving a stick shift.
On this path, I encountered an extraordinary assortment of souls ~ seers, seekers, sheiks, shakers and movers, politicians, pilots, dancers, singers, healers, meditators, mediators, consummate travelers, artists, writers, thinkers, teachers, producers, idealists and cynics as well as plotters of good and evil.
My current fellow travelers are world citizens with virtual voices who share their life-trips by retrospection. A varied group of travelers who poem, photograph, fiction, rant and art the past and present while challenging the future.
These are interesting times with interesting fellows!
before the after
the bite of an auger
punched black holes
in the blinding gloom
mango blush flooded
the argent sky
blamed the yellowed map
mabe blue Morse code
kissing the catbrier
loosed the prick of reality
the final chart shines
under stella de ora and
bliss leaves no sign
Sunday Scribblings Prompt
30 comments:
Quite an assortment of people in your poem. It's interesting how you used "poem,fiction,and art" as verbs. Very artistic.
your colors make a nice rainbow image!
your poem is so rich in language it is breathtakingly beautiful...oh, how i wish to borrow your Muse....
overall, terrific post. very nicely written.
Your current fellow travelers sound like my current fellow travelers..... The wonderful bloggers we've met and continue to meet each day. Isn't it an uplifting journey? :)
I have been sedused by words, wonderful post.
The internet is such a strange and wonderful place, with new discoveries waiting around each corner...
mango blush flooded
the argent sky
Oh how I wish I could have seen the sunset that inspired these words.
You describe this wonderful journey superbly - as always! Bravo!
I definitely enjoyed these! Very well done. Here is another recent poem of mine. :)
OneLuvGurl
Your posts are always so well worded..and beautiful...
leveller
i like you are enjoying the respite from life,, filled to the brim with my virtual friends.... very nice take on the prompt.
Nicely done. I like the poem best.
What a lovely way to describe your travels thus far. Sounds like you have encountered a colourful community on your journey too. Long may the adventure continue.
mango blush flooded
the argent sky
blamed the yellowed map
especially like this for the colors, energy and image.
I so enjoyed this - but then I always look forward to new pieces from you!
Even your prose is poetry! What a gift you have with words!
That is a great piece - especially that list! All human life seems to be there.
What a great group of travelers.... colorful and full of life... wonderful!
Dee
http://pavinganewroad.wordpress.com/
I especially like the line," These are interesting times with interesting fellows!"
Beautiful writing... I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
this line "clicked" with me.....
"a series of too-soon starts with sudden stops which can be likened to first attempts at driving a stick shift"
nice piece!
I agree with Marcella "These are interesting times with interesting fellows!" was my favorite line too. Interesting to think of all of us as "virtual" travelers too...what a journey and a path we have created...I love your poetry and am glad to call you fellow Idahoan.
The internet has certainly made our worlds more colorful as beautifully expressed in your poem.
I love the poem, it's so beautifully painted, so perfectly strung. The prose is nice too!
Great post. I am proud to be one of your fellow travelers.
Sue,
We do meet a variety of souls along the byways of our journeys don't we? Getting lost even with a map can bring surprising satisfactions to end the day brightly.
People and words; two of my favorite things. ;)
rel
i always love your poems, but i think this is my favorite of those i've read. that language! just gorgeous.
I was secretly hoping to get back to I could read some more of your poetry. Thanks.
"Punched black holes in the blinding gloom..."
Wow, I love your poem.
Excellent poem. Continued interesting travels.
Impressive, as always. And "argent..." That's not a word you get to use every day! Well done.
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