...blush of dawn
reclaims the sky
bare aspen quiver
in the early breeze
...tenderness adrift
acrimony thrives
pundits repeating
old air overheats
Blush, Quiver, Tenderness were the prompt words from ThomG at Three Word Wednesday. Follow the links to see what others wrote and to play along!
Image created in Adobe Elements and Bamboo Fun
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Change
Labels:
3wordWednesday,
bamboo fun,
poem
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
6 comments:
For me, the opening was just about perfect.
I like that!
spare and beautiful and thought-provoking!
blush of dawn, I like that it, it signals a change, something new, but ends with something old
i too loved blush of dawn!
how are u sue?
nice to read a post of yours!
I like the starting stanza,,, it builds up..
warming up to you and lot more...
Post a Comment