Bone, the moderator of Three Word Wednesday says: Each week, I post some words. People write things using the words. Then they comment here. The words this week: Intimate, River, Waiting
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dog days
intimate as night
river idles in its bed
cataract waiting
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poetry watercolor
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12 comments:
You and I were thinking along the same lines! I like the conciseness of your haiku!
I love the latent energy of your haiku. That waterfall is just around the bend, I think. :)
There's a shock coming, there, I think.
Excellent words.
That word cataract has amazing, critical energy at that point in your poem! Delightful haiku!
These are definitely the dog days of summer, no?
Beautifully descriptive haiku! I like the way you contrast idleness with a cataract just waiting to happen.
A slow march to a violent leap, eh? Nice. I like "idles" best. Good word.
This one left me rather contemplative. Wonderful contrasts.
What a surprising end to the haiku. It feels like a sudden bend in the river.
Absolutely awesome. Such depth!
Hi SUe!
great Haiku!
This is great!
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