thin lines of a trail
crop circles formed by fauna
night's grass kneels at rest
dissects the dewy meadow
sun erases all traces
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Wednesday, June 16, 2010
Tanka for 3WW
ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday, offers the following prompt words: meadow, erase, trace
thin lines of a trail
crop circles formed by fauna
night's grass kneels at rest
dissects the dewy meadow
sun erases all traces
thin lines of a trail
crop circles formed by fauna
night's grass kneels at rest
dissects the dewy meadow
sun erases all traces
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Great combination of words and picture.
Nice. It's kind of magical, isn't it, the way the sun does that?
spiritual.. nice!
beautiful one Sue...:) loved it! :)
You captured the atmosphere in a few words.
Beautifully described.
This is beautiful!!! I so envy your kind who can make a few words paint a wonderful photo in the mind.
nice, you always seem to have the right picture to go with the words... fauna created crop circles, popped as a possible changed line... but who am I to make suggestions, I haven't written in a long time now...
K
Great interplay of words and with matching picture to enjoy.
I love the poem and the picture. Also, I'm impressed by the header picture of the flower. a favorite art form of mine.
there's something soothing about the lines and shape of tall grasses ... you've captured it well!
peace,
JP/deb
Lovely.
beautiful portrayal. keep writing. cheers
I especially like the last line.
gorgeous line: night's grass kneels at rest - loved that and I love the flower header picture too :)
I love how you fit the poem and picture together. Very nice writing. I saw your header mentions fractals -- an interest of mine, although I haven't done much with it lately.
Academic, but still close to nature. interesting poem.
Best wishes
Ralf
nice tanka that sets up a beautiful scene a particular place involving all subtle aspects of nature and the foto puts a picture of there in my mind... blue sky
You painted a lovely picture with so few words. I enjoyed this!
- Dina
nice. found you via Jingle's poet's rally
a lovely portrait!
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in such a small piece, wonderful description.
Lovely! Perfectly captures the mystery of animals in the night.
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