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Sunday, June 13, 2010

Oubliette for OSI

One Single Impression: Prompt 120: Oubliette



thinking from a box
coloring inside the lines
wide mouth and closed mind
the tea and tunnel vision
creates her own oubliette

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A fractal.
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14 comments:

The Write Girl said...

A creative and unique take on the prompt. Lovely writing here!

rallentanda said...

Very clever observation and link to the prompt. A closed mind and tunnel vision is the antithesis to the true essence of Christian faith.Sadly too many professing Christians have no understanding of the tenets of their own religion.

anthonynorth said...

Yes, so many create one of them in the mind.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

"Wide mouth and closed mind"...powerful!

Naquillity said...

wonderful use of the prompt. hope all is well.

Aayushi Mehta said...

Lovely. Sometimes we all create our own oubliettes.

fourwindshaiga said...

The worst kind of prison.
Great job, Sue.

Carina said...

I wonder what she thinks about her box. Some people are comfortable that way. =)

A bit like the Matrix.

flaubert said...

Susan I love this from the first line to the last!
It is a great take on the prompt!
Pamela

SandyCarlson said...

Such an oubliette might as well be way, way under ground, so much distance does it create.

brenda w said...

Excellent post. I like Carina's comment, some people are comfortable that way.

Sam Liu said...

Very original, very imaginative and a true delight to read! A great post, as ever :)

Jim said...

"Build your own oubliette by conformity." I hadn't thought of things that way.
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rlavalette said...

Prison is within. Always we make it.

Well done.