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Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Tanka for 3WW

ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday, offers the following prompt words:  meadow, erase, trace




thin lines of a trail
crop circles formed by fauna
night's grass kneels at rest
dissects the dewy meadow
sun erases all traces



Digital Photo

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24 comments:

Stan Ski said...

Great combination of words and picture.

bunnygirl said...

Nice. It's kind of magical, isn't it, the way the sun does that?

fiveloaf said...

spiritual.. nice!

Amity said...

beautiful one Sue...:) loved it! :)

Rinkly Rimes said...

You captured the atmosphere in a few words.

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully described.

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

This is beautiful!!! I so envy your kind who can make a few words paint a wonderful photo in the mind.

Kristy Worden said...

nice, you always seem to have the right picture to go with the words... fauna created crop circles, popped as a possible changed line... but who am I to make suggestions, I haven't written in a long time now...
K

Autumn Belle @ KDP said...

Great interplay of words and with matching picture to enjoy.

Lilibeth said...

I love the poem and the picture. Also, I'm impressed by the header picture of the flower. a favorite art form of mine.

JP/deb said...

there's something soothing about the lines and shape of tall grasses ... you've captured it well!

peace,
JP/deb

Angel said...

Lovely.

joesuzz said...

beautiful portrayal. keep writing. cheers

Carina said...

I especially like the last line.

Dee Martin said...

gorgeous line: night's grass kneels at rest - loved that and I love the flower header picture too :)

morganna said...

I love how you fit the poem and picture together. Very nice writing. I saw your header mentions fractals -- an interest of mine, although I haven't done much with it lately.

Ralf Bröker said...

Academic, but still close to nature. interesting poem.

Best wishes
Ralf

pieceofpie said...

nice tanka that sets up a beautiful scene a particular place involving all subtle aspects of nature and the foto puts a picture of there in my mind... blue sky

mypoeticlicense said...

You painted a lovely picture with so few words. I enjoyed this!

- Dina

kkrige said...

nice. found you via Jingle's poet's rally

mairmusic said...

a lovely portrait!
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Jingle said...

Please return favors to poets who were here,
Thank you in advance…
everyone needs encouragement…
Happy Friday!
;)

I have sent this to every poet in my list.

ThomG said...

in such a small piece, wonderful description.

Mega said...

Lovely! Perfectly captures the mystery of animals in the night.