Another NaiSaiKu response!
tiny buds escape
May hums winter's melody
vibrant greens ice up
spring holds tight to frigid hands
vibrant greens ice up
May hums winter's melody
tiny buds escape
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Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Thursday, May 06, 2010
NaiSaiKu for 3WW
ThomG, 3Word Wednesday, offers these words for prompt: vibrant, escape, hum
Another NaiSaiKu response!
tiny buds escape
May hums winter's melody
vibrant greens ice up
spring holds tight to frigid hands
vibrant greens ice up
May hums winter's melody
tiny buds escape
Original watercolor using workshop prompts.
Another NaiSaiKu response!
tiny buds escape
May hums winter's melody
vibrant greens ice up
spring holds tight to frigid hands
vibrant greens ice up
May hums winter's melody
tiny buds escape
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18 comments:
Nicely nicely nicely!
Nicely to the prompt!!
Nicely to the season!!!
Nicely to the NaiSaiKu!!!!
Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge?
I need to try NaiSaiKu, this was visually great. Loved the watercolor too. :)
Brilliant, I got a real and wonderful sense of spring from this poem. What marvellous prompts :)
masterfully done!
very smooth flow!
Lovely spring thoughts Sue!
My journey in blogville would not be complete without dropping by your place for the 3WW and the OSI takes you will make, and for me to read!
And they are always a treat coz I dunno how to write Naisaiku myself!
Oh, this is so beautiful and so calming! I can't think of another word for it...
Read my 3WW offering: Prisoner #712 - here.
A wonderful tribute to spring.
How lovely! Happy Spring!
How fascinating! I'd never come across this poetry form again and will have to re-read your poem several times to get the full meaning. I love the nature imagery.
Being stale with winter I cannot help to cheer on the escape of those tiny buds. You do the NaiSaiKu style quite well!
I hope you are moving past the frigid hands part! It was actually in the eighties here yesterday. Blissful though a reminder that summer will bring hot and dry and we will soon be wishing for a bit of frigid! This was gorgeous and the image fits so well.
I wonder how long it'd take me to post a NaiSaiKu!
The watercolour is pretty interesting, I can see the words actualize in the photo.
The colours are pretty striking too for watercolour.
Nice, nice . I loved it.
Melanie
Wowie, this is like a watercolor painting in words.
Got me dreaming of springtime as I bake in 100+ heat, or stew in 100% humidity.
Your control over words and form is excellent.
Happy Mother's Day,my friend!
You look BEAUTIFUL, then and NOW!
You are such a wonderful friend and MOTHER!
May this Mother's Day be one of the best with more to come in years!
YOU ROCK, MOMMY!
hugs
shakira
love this watercolour =)
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