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Thursday, May 06, 2010

NaiSaiKu for 3WW

ThomG, 3Word Wednesday, offers these words for prompt: vibrant, escape, hum
Another NaiSaiKu response!



tiny buds escape
May hums winter's melody
vibrant greens ice up
spring holds tight to frigid hands
vibrant greens ice up
May hums winter's melody
tiny buds escape


Original watercolor using workshop prompts.
 
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19 comments:

Andy Sewina said...

Nicely nicely nicely!
Nicely to the prompt!!
Nicely to the season!!!
Nicely to the NaiSaiKu!!!!


Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

Tammy Brierly said...

I need to try NaiSaiKu, this was visually great. Loved the watercolor too. :)

Sam Liu said...

Brilliant, I got a real and wonderful sense of spring from this poem. What marvellous prompts :)

Jingle said...

masterfully done!
very smooth flow!

Amity said...

Lovely spring thoughts Sue!

My journey in blogville would not be complete without dropping by your place for the 3WW and the OSI takes you will make, and for me to read!

And they are always a treat coz I dunno how to write Naisaiku myself!

Julie Jordan Scott said...

Oh, this is so beautiful and so calming! I can't think of another word for it...

Read my 3WW offering: Prisoner #712 - here.

ThomG said...

A wonderful tribute to spring.

bunnygirl said...

How lovely! Happy Spring!

fiona glass said...

How fascinating! I'd never come across this poetry form again and will have to re-read your poem several times to get the full meaning. I love the nature imagery.

Tammy said...

Gorgeous!

Jay Thurston said...

Being stale with winter I cannot help to cheer on the escape of those tiny buds. You do the NaiSaiKu style quite well!

Dee Martin said...

I hope you are moving past the frigid hands part! It was actually in the eighties here yesterday. Blissful though a reminder that summer will bring hot and dry and we will soon be wishing for a bit of frigid! This was gorgeous and the image fits so well.

snapperoni said...

I wonder how long it'd take me to post a NaiSaiKu!

The watercolour is pretty interesting, I can see the words actualize in the photo.

The colours are pretty striking too for watercolour.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nice, nice . I loved it.


Melanie

Thomma Lyn said...

Wowie, this is like a watercolor painting in words.

Stan Ski said...

Got me dreaming of springtime as I bake in 100+ heat, or stew in 100% humidity.

Vivek said...

Your control over words and form is excellent.

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Happy Mother's Day,my friend!
You look BEAUTIFUL, then and NOW!
You are such a wonderful friend and MOTHER!
May this Mother's Day be one of the best with more to come in years!
YOU ROCK, MOMMY!
hugs
shakira

lucychili said...

love this watercolour =)