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Sunday, May 23, 2010

Floating for OSI

One Single Impression: Prompt 117: Floating

Minimized Tanka


scents of spring
circle, floating free
pacify
bitter impatience
bred in winter's bed

 
 
 
 
 

Digital Photo.
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18 comments:

brenda said...

...and we northerners often have a long wait!

anthonynorth said...

I think the wait is over in my part of the world.

Sandra (if) said...

interesting true thoughts...and pic!

Sam Liu said...

Such a beautiful piece to compliment the wonders of spring :)

rallentanda said...

Lovely. I am writing this in winter's bed all cosy in flannelette sheets. Fortunately our winters are quite mild.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

I love the sights and senses this evoked...lovely words!

SandyCarlson said...

Those scents can work the finest magic at the most important times.

Carina said...

Beautiful and deep. I love finding so much meaning in so few words.

Ramesh Sood said...

Few words can say what millions can't.. you always prove this.. amazingly beautiful..Thanks for visiting me too and inspiring as usual..

Harshad mehta said...

Beautiful words that bring scents. Can feel aroma.

Aayushi Mehta said...

Beautiful verse.

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful as always..

Tentacles

Quiet Paths said...

You sing it, sister. We will continue with the song of spring even if it only slowly being carried on the wind.

fourwindshaiga said...

It is coming, Sue. We are having our first really warm day.

The minimized tank works well.

Naquillity said...

the scents of spring have been swirling here for some time now. love that winter has past. i'm enjoying the good weather. have a great day.

Patti said...

Oh I love the scents of spring wafting on the wind- nicely written Sue!

JP/deb said...

time for Spring!! love the last line bred in winter's bed ooooooo, great!

Menina said...

Succinct and lovely!