a flannel shirt
striped black and white
fine lines planned
nothing left to chance
seasonally stored
behind soft colors
that fabricate
unsure thoughts
sapped by doubt
she slides into
the black and white
decides not to strayTotally Optional Prompts posts: let's consider adjectives Follow the link to play along with us or to read what others have written.
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, converted to black and white, resized in Irfanview and framed in FrameFun.
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15 comments:
It would be easier for me to comment. I like your poems very much. There would be much to say about this one (self-doubt, well planned life...).
nice use of adjectives...
;->...
Intriguing words. I liked them.
the narrative ended unexpectedly!
Liked how it goes!
holding on
Enjoyed this. Like what is suggests and the rhythm of the read. And for awhile, I wore a lot of flannel shirts even though I'm as urban as they come. :-)
enjoying your new sense of writing... haven't been by much of late... as always absolutely truly love the artwork w/yr post... standing between black n white too long can be disturbing in a quiet sorta way...
I like the image this ends with! Intriguing metaphor!
Dear Tumblewords,
I like this SO SO much!
You allow my imagination to paint the world and I leap right in.
I suspect that we all can. You give enough clues that all your readers would recognize the Platonic truth of each other's creations, but we all have crafted our own shadows.
Great job.
Thanks.
Tschuess,
Chris
I liked this a great deal. "Seasonally stored" is such an intriguing description, and I love the visualization of sliding into black and white. Great picture for that.
Soft adjectives make a comfortably fitting poem.
I thought TOPS was Take Off Pounds Sensibly.
I like these, they seem to be subtle thoughts of doubt and has movement in the way it is said
Wonderful!
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