Sunday Scribblings prompts: Where did you start? Where do you start? How did it all begin? Where do you stand right now?
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a tell-tale graph
not the Akashic book
reveals a lackluster line
the tell-tale graph
rises from the first scene
shudders past the peak
a tell-tale graph
with lines of new and not
dots of bleached parts
the tell-tale graph
a block buster outline
with the plot left out
the tell-tale graph
lines drawn in sand til
the end falls off the chart
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The fractal image was created in Apophysis.
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19 comments:
Nice image and poem.
Love the image and interesting poetry!! Read it several times to drink it in!
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Nice. That picture above the poem reminds me of a grevillea flower. A common Aussie native.
Loved this. I've researched the Akashic Records myself in the past. Intriguing.
Good use of metaphor..Nice image :)
Keep writing!
My favorites:
with lines of new and not
a block buster outline
with the plot left out
I like the lovely contrast of a "tell-tale graph" with a "plot left out." We all bounce and resound in that tidy yoga asana...
wow --- such imaginative allegory - you are truly talented with verse!!!
I love the image. Although I do feel a bit disconnected from the collective subconscious.
it is always such a pleasure to visit your blog. i love this...
It's been a while since I visited Sunday Scribblings and checked into your site. I am happy to see your creativity and graciousness continues to inspire.
Interesting imagery there, our lives as a graph, rising and falling depending on what we do, and who we are.
Gosh, this is so good. I don't know how you do it!!
No offense, but I'm not sure I get it.
Love the idea of the tell tale graph!!
You are so darn creative Sue. Loved it all and always do. :)
Interesting imagery and very descriptive of our lives. I also enjoyed the picture you included with the poem. Great job, talented lady!
CReative Sue I do love u! xo
a tell-tale graph
depicting great feelings
and marvellous writings..
Very intriguing words, and beautiful image to go with it!
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