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Sunday, November 01, 2009

Haiku for One Single Impression

One Single Impression: Prompt 88: Shift in Time





a dither
at the cusp of then
nixes now


autumn leaves
fury of snowflakes
blink of time


shift of time
vintage transmission
Dynaflow

 
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, resized in Irfanview.
 
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24 comments:

Amias said...

Tumblewords these are priceless, and I am older enough to remember "Dynaflow".

anthonynorth said...

Short but very sweet. Excellent.

SandyCarlson said...

That dither....Like an auger it digs into the soul to nix now.

These are wonderful, Sue. I wish I could communicate the nod and the "yeah" your work brings out in me. I respect your talent.

Jukota said...

Dither stopped me in my tracks, just as it nixed now! Absolutely wonderful!

lissa said...

I like the 2nd one, the change of season, they come so fast

gautami tripathy said...

Blink of time..Loved that!

deathly adventure

Also don't forget to post any of your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited!

Jeeves said...

as usual lovely words:D

Maggie said...

I recall in the early 1950`s my daddy bought a buick dynaflow and it had four holes on the sides of the hood.

It felt like we were on a greyhound bus when we rode in it...a very smooth ride.

You shifted my mind back in pleasant memories of a different time...thanks :)

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

yes..it does move away fast.

Giggles said...

True that..nice!!

Leo said...

a very good haiku! :)

fourwindshaiga said...

Sue, 'a dither' is my favorite out of these three, but all so clever.

Tammie Lee said...

your art and words are a perfect mate. you have captured the threshold of seasons and how all is in the midst of change.

Crazy how our poem says so much in so few words and my comment goes on and on. I like your style more.

indicaspecies said...

Lovely. I too have written on the same topic of how the autumn changes to winter with a shift in time.

Mads... said...

nice haiku..vry well said..:)

Rinkly Rimes said...

The fractal fits the words beautifully.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Sue, this is excellent. You say so much with so little.

love, Melanie

Geraldine said...

Wonderful work Sue! Oh, I just loved this one. The artwork is superb and your words, perfect.

if said...

very nice..!

namingconstellations said...

I love how each line of the first one has a particularly neat word, and how the second moves from autumn to winter so elegantly... haiku must convey a sense of space(-time), and this is a clear example. Nifty image, too! :)

Quiet Paths said...

The arrangement of the words flowing with the art piece does provide that shift in time!

Patti said...

First of all- love, love the fractal! Your poems are awesome- I especially like the first two. Time shifts so quickly in autumn weatherwise- we are shifting back into summer here this weekend. And personally, I do way too much dithering for my own good...

gabrielle said...

how well you capture the quivering moment at the cusp!

Jim said...

I am so sorry that I am this late. My week has been behind since it started. I could not catch up from my Birthday running away holiday. I have some of that on my other blog with more to come.
These are very nice Sue. If I were to pick a favorite it would be the 'blink of time.'
I never was a Buick fan and none in the 50's nor a Chevy could beat my hot rod Ford flathead with Fordamatic.
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