tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post5383644640975830165..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Haiku for One Single ImpressionTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26535093219950362912009-11-07T17:10:33.835-08:002009-11-07T17:10:33.835-08:00I am so sorry that I am this late. My week has be...I am so sorry that I am this late. My week has been behind since it started. I could not catch up from my Birthday running away holiday. I have some of that on my other blog with more to come. <br />These are very nice Sue. If I were to pick a favorite it would be the 'blink of time.' <br />I never was a Buick fan and none in the 50's nor a Chevy could beat my hot rod Ford flathead with Fordamatic.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-16823321167582564832009-11-07T08:38:56.592-08:002009-11-07T08:38:56.592-08:00how well you capture the quivering moment at the c...how well you capture the quivering moment at the cusp!gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52043945209774715172009-11-07T06:12:08.001-08:002009-11-07T06:12:08.001-08:00First of all- love, love the fractal! Your poems ...First of all- love, love the fractal! Your poems are awesome- I especially like the first two. Time shifts so quickly in autumn weatherwise- we are shifting back into summer here this weekend. And personally, I do way too much dithering for my own good...Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32818157099224737342009-11-05T17:54:47.692-08:002009-11-05T17:54:47.692-08:00The arrangement of the words flowing with the art ...The arrangement of the words flowing with the art piece does provide that shift in time!Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84186665684251715192009-11-04T08:23:17.435-08:002009-11-04T08:23:17.435-08:00I love how each line of the first one has a partic...I love how each line of the first one has a particularly neat word, and how the second moves from autumn to winter so elegantly... haiku must convey a sense of space(-time), and this is a clear example. Nifty image, too! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78859341315379301992009-11-03T13:48:50.237-08:002009-11-03T13:48:50.237-08:00very nice..!very nice..!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-54046979402476345312009-11-03T10:07:30.598-08:002009-11-03T10:07:30.598-08:00Wonderful work Sue! Oh, I just loved this one. The...Wonderful work Sue! Oh, I just loved this one. The artwork is superb and your words, perfect.Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-251194115289733422009-11-03T09:49:05.398-08:002009-11-03T09:49:05.398-08:00Sue, this is excellent. You say so much with so li...Sue, this is excellent. You say so much with so little.<br /><br />love, MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-35144882462815694762009-11-03T02:55:20.793-08:002009-11-03T02:55:20.793-08:00The fractal fits the words beautifully.The fractal fits the words beautifully.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31974413318273113812009-11-03T00:53:02.340-08:002009-11-03T00:53:02.340-08:00nice haiku..vry well said..:)nice haiku..vry well said..:)Mads...https://www.blogger.com/profile/18396027114150900038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88854131857810172332009-11-02T23:22:29.967-08:002009-11-02T23:22:29.967-08:00Lovely. I too have written on the same topic of ho...Lovely. I too have written on the same topic of how the autumn changes to winter with a shift in time.indicaspecieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61285295848821078262009-11-02T22:21:30.228-08:002009-11-02T22:21:30.228-08:00your art and words are a perfect mate. you have ca...your art and words are a perfect mate. you have captured the threshold of seasons and how all is in the midst of change. <br /><br />Crazy how our poem says so much in so few words and my comment goes on and on. I like your style more.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55557398605897253032009-11-02T12:40:37.497-08:002009-11-02T12:40:37.497-08:00Sue, 'a dither' is my favorite out of thes...Sue, 'a dither' is my favorite out of these three, but all so clever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19865335945442624252009-11-02T07:58:09.294-08:002009-11-02T07:58:09.294-08:00a very good haiku! :)a very good haiku! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-86813317133009138092009-11-02T03:48:27.601-08:002009-11-02T03:48:27.601-08:00True that..nice!!True that..nice!!Giggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72627252670192967932009-11-01T21:56:31.563-08:002009-11-01T21:56:31.563-08:00yes..it does move away fast.yes..it does move away fast.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64497523404657003402009-11-01T20:53:51.451-08:002009-11-01T20:53:51.451-08:00I recall in the early 1950`s my daddy bought a bui...I recall in the early 1950`s my daddy bought a buick dynaflow and it had four holes on the sides of the hood.<br /><br />It felt like we were on a greyhound bus when we rode in it...a very smooth ride.<br /><br />You shifted my mind back in pleasant memories of a different time...thanks :)Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44288372301903414002009-11-01T20:32:46.670-08:002009-11-01T20:32:46.670-08:00as usual lovely words:Das usual lovely words:DJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58212007950992961222009-11-01T18:42:53.630-08:002009-11-01T18:42:53.630-08:00Blink of time..Loved that!
deathly adventure
Also...Blink of time..Loved that!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/10/deathly-adventure.html" rel="nofollow">deathly adventure</a><br /><br>Also don't forget to post any of your creative works at <a href="http://mondaypoetrytrainrevisited.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Monday Poetry Train Revisited</a>!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48955362416274407652009-11-01T18:15:24.296-08:002009-11-01T18:15:24.296-08:00I like the 2nd one, the change of season, they com...I like the 2nd one, the change of season, they come so fastlissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91905194150365352092009-11-01T18:00:12.154-08:002009-11-01T18:00:12.154-08:00Dither stopped me in my tracks, just as it nixed n...Dither stopped me in my tracks, just as it nixed now! Absolutely wonderful!Jukotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00103565958637835237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52310756672899814072009-11-01T17:55:58.060-08:002009-11-01T17:55:58.060-08:00That dither....Like an auger it digs into the soul...That dither....Like an auger it digs into the soul to nix now. <br /><br />These are wonderful, Sue. I wish I could communicate the nod and the "yeah" your work brings out in me. I respect your talent.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24353491824381640402009-11-01T14:11:25.710-08:002009-11-01T14:11:25.710-08:00Short but very sweet. Excellent.Short but very sweet. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-75641950737433618822009-11-01T12:48:45.509-08:002009-11-01T12:48:45.509-08:00Tumblewords these are priceless, and I am older en...Tumblewords these are priceless, and I am older enough to remember "Dynaflow".Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.com