an errant hanker
overcomes his murky mind
chaos tweaks the string
a hundred nightmares reel when
chaos tweaked the string
overcame his murky mind
with errant hankers
Fractal created in Apophysis, tinted in Picasa, resized in Irfanview.
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Thursday, November 12, 2009
Cycliku for 3WW
ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday, offers these words for prompt: hanker, murky, errant
an errant hanker
overcomes his murky mind
chaos tweaks the string
a hundred nightmares reel when
chaos tweaked the string
overcame his murky mind
with errant hankers
Fractal created in Apophysis, tinted in Picasa, resized in Irfanview.
an errant hanker
overcomes his murky mind
chaos tweaks the string
a hundred nightmares reel when
chaos tweaked the string
overcame his murky mind
with errant hankers
Fractal created in Apophysis, tinted in Picasa, resized in Irfanview.
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11 comments:
These are always so elegant, the way you construct them....
This is cleverly done. Loved it.
nicwly done loved the construction of it.I like you style of writimg.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving your comment. I look forward to reading you again..
Larry
Wow....The errant ways so well said
Thats well said..."Chaos tweaks the string" and tug the murky mind.
Smart! :))
I like how the one line repeats. This is good stuff. I like when you try something different.
WOW!!!!... now thaz magic.... and that fractal compliments perfectly...
nice cycliku as always. hope all is well.
Dear Tumblewords,
Wowsers. This is a great poem. I love the fact that "a hundred nightmares reel when chaos tweaked the string".
Structure, symbolism, sound, feel in my mouth and in my ear... all systems go!
I have been giving a few people grief, politely, I hope, for grammatical liberties that do not appear to be intended--because they visually jar when I see them. And here, I didn't even notice, at first, the odd use of hanker. And I am so OK with it because everything fits so well and just belongs with everything else.
I am a happy reader, happy to handed this little tangle.
I wish R.D. Laing could take a boo, he'd like it, too.
When I read poems like this, or vignettes like Thom's "Glutton" I wish that I had come reading a week earlier.
Really nice work, and thank you so much for sharing this with us all.
Tschuess,
Chris
Oooo, I like this fractal very much.
Poem, echo, mirror. The reflection of humanity is so full of hankerings.
Miss you more than mentioned.
All the best!
Juliene
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