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Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Cycliku for 3WW

ThomG, moderator of 3Word Wednesday offers these three words as prompt: Accident, Loyal, Obscene





bound by new wander
loyal to an unseen map
it's no accident
destiny may turn obscene
by no accident
loyal to that hidden map
she's here to wander


Image created on Bamboo Tablet with Adobe Photoshop Elements.

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10 comments:

ThomG said...

I like who you've taken certain words and repeated them. I think it works well to push this forward to a great ending line.

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully done with great use of words.

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, that hidden map. So full of surprises.

Sepiru Chris said...

Tumblewords,

You are well named.

You tumble words, and polish them, and then carefully place them into arrangements so that they hold together and form a cohesive whole, like a drystone wall.

Only one word had some burrs that caught at my jumper as I came by, today; the first use of wander catches a bit. It does not seem the snuggest of fits, although I well understand your syllabic meter constraint.

Tschuess,
Chris

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

cool cyckilu!!very fun..

gautami tripathy said...

Love the end!

ship-wreck

Michelle Johnson said...

those inner maps can take one on a certain/ uncertain journey, can't they? wonderful writing today and that photoshop is great. have a delightful day.

Marie said...

I like your writing very much. Your painting is "puzzling" (I mean it looks like a puzzle). Very nice "ensemble"...

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

I love the unseen map! We're all destined to follow our hidden map.

~willow~ said...

Oh, very nice ... there is a beautiful symmetry to the piece, the message, the words... :)