Just Past Before
half a world past dark
when wobble
alters axis
in a crush of time
poles trade space
warm swings to cool
revelations
unwrite tomorrow
while words twist
dust to ashes
somewhere beyond
half a world past light
Fractal image created in Apophysis, resized and buttoned in Irfanview.
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14 comments:
I'd like to be able to write poems as you do. I think the French language does not allow such "freedom."
Wow!!!Just too good. Both image and poem.
Awesome image and verse!
I am always so eager to read your posts. Your originality is refreshing and inspiring. Any one of your pieces of art would completely grace someone's living room wall. Outstanding!
Love the opposite positions of first and last line.
Excellent.
i love the way you sandwiched this poem in between the dark and the light... very effective...
I like this one a lot Sue, especially the last verse. Excellent!
cool banana's!
Your writing process never ceases to amaze me. I think both your fractal and poem go hand in hand this week. Very strong work. Have a nice weekend.
the last stanza is superb
What a fab' image - and a poem of equal worht! Superb post.
half past wonderful!
excellent poem - peace, JP/deb
Ooh, profound, T. Gives me the global warming heebeegeebees.
Your word choices ever please me: half a world past dark, past light, crush of time, dust to ashes...
I love the poem and the image. I have been a bit busy and not had time to come around and visit. It was refreshing to read your poems again.
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