Totally Optional Prompts posts: Tardiness
Late
her future loiters
on the double offsides
of a dozen tomorrows ~
tonight she breathes
a kiss for amour
to the bright Venus star,
first twinkle of dusk,
while pleading to miss
that well-known downside
of endless tardiness
her future loiters
on the double offsides
of a dozen tomorrows ~
tonight she breathes
a kiss for amour
to the bright Venus star,
first twinkle of dusk,
while pleading to miss
that well-known downside
of endless tardiness
Image created on Bamboo Fun Tablet with Photoshop Elements, resized in Irfanview.
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14 comments:
Something we all want to miss!
Those first three lines are awesome! And I like the echo of double and dozens!
Better late than never!
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2009/05/tardy.html
better late than never indeed!
your blog is a visual explosion, sensational.
Novel
love the way you put her thoughts together
Wow!!!Lovely pic and poem.
You're speaking to the tardy queen here!! Well done...it would be nice!!
Hugs Giggles
She'll get there.
Excellent words.
The imagery in this piece is very well done. Love the pic as well.
So visual. Wonderful!
Your thoughts and words are always so well placed and precise. I love those first three lines. And, your artwork is beautiful. Have a nice weekend.
The imagery in both the poem and the artwork are comfortably familiar, yet at the same time, awakening.
Absolutely beautiful piece of art! And then the poetry enriches the whole sensory experience! Wonderful!
I use to be obsessed with being on time, not in the past few years LOL... Love this watercolor and great poem to accompany. Well done Sue!
double offsides..love that!
unfocussed
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