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Thursday, December 20, 2007

Road Re-Traveled


Into the mirror of hindsight
I squinted toward the past
rapidly edited my errata
squeaky cleaned my life
to reflect memoir bright
...returned to the present
laughed out loud
even with the handy mirror
I didn’t get it precisely right.





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9 comments:

paisley said...

the past is like the written word,, so easily edited to provide the most bang for the buck... this was lovely....

gautami tripathy said...

In fact you got it just right here!

:D

rooted
reading room

sister AE said...

This is great! I love the phrase "mirror of hindsight" and it is just terrific.

Jo said...

clever, clever words.

Brian said...

It's always those pesky little details. :)

Have a Merry Christmas

SweetTalkingGuy said...

I like this, 'the mirror of hindsight' what a thought.

Linda said...

You've got that right! I like the rhyme in here, too! Neat poem!

Jane Poe (aka Deborah) said...

clever, wonderful poem ... it brought a smile to my face! Merry Christmas! JP/deb

watermaid said...

I've just found this wonderful poem. As someone with a reasonable store of hindsight, I loved the idea of looking 'into the mirror of hindsight', editing errata and a 'squeaky cleaned' life.