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Monday, December 10, 2007

Yummy ~ Haiku Two


suet on bare limbs
kernels and seeds in saucers
finches perched on guard

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one drop of vermouth
one jigger of tanqueray
one good night from me





The Prompt from One Deep Breath is Yummy. This topic is difficult for a non-cook.

17 comments:

Quiet Paths said...

That second one made me laugh out loud! What a fun one. The first is near to my heart - wild bird yummies! Thanks for these.

Michelle Johnson said...

That's one way to sleep undisturbed. I hope you set out that suet for the finches beforehand. What fun you seemed to have with these. Keep up the good work.

Also, you have been tagged to write me a poem involving 7 things about you.

Have a nice night.

Michelle Johnson said...

I thought you might like to know my story of Santa Monica Pier is up. Hope you enjoy the story.

Sandy Carlson said...

There is a virtue in knowing what we need! Lovely poems. God bless.

forgetfulone said...

I have tagged your for a meme if you'd like to participate. If not, I understand. Thanks!

Greggo said...

two lovely haiku. they both made me smile, but the second one for a different reason! lol.

Krissie said...

superb!

paisley said...

now that second one makes real good sense to me!!!!!!

spacedlaw said...

Plenty of things are yummy! You did very well.

susan said...

Enjoyed these both. Thanks for the read.

Tiffany said...

I really like the first one. It puts such a picture in my mind.

Sharon Delman said...

Fantastic haiku. The first captures the seasonal scene, the second sparks with wit.

qualcosa di bello said...

a perfectly clever (& yummy!) set of haiku! lucky birds & lucky you! :)

Patois said...

I'm always happy to come by and grin at your ku. Love that good night.

get zapped said...

They're both very nice, but the second one made me chuckle ;)

Barone said...

They are both wonderfully descriptive . I love the sound of the second read aloud, as well as the words.
jodi barone

LittleWing said...

absolutely loved your haikus...