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Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Oooops!


Clumsy chimney chap
his crimson suit sports black holes
...overlooked the fire







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3WW Prompt: clumsy, fire, overlooked...where else could I go in seventeen syllables?
Digital photo by Sue
This silly haiku is Tumblewords' post #250

18 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

How perfect this is for Christmas! Very clever!

paisley said...

hysterical!!! i wonder about that and fireplace inserts too!!!!!!

he'd be hurtin' at my house!!!!

Anonymous said...

Oh I love this! What a cheeky spin all all the holiday detrius that's out there at this time of year. :)

a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous! said...

love it! BIG SMILE!!!

Anonymous said...

Love it, I can see Santa's going to have a hard time at your house. ;)

Rose

xo

lissa said...

Fun poem. Maybe he should have use the door?

TC said...

Not real smart to overlook that fire :)

Anonymous said...

oops indeed ...smiling :)

UL

AscenderRisesAbove said...

very cute haiku! perfect visual

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Lea said...

Enjoyed those seventeen syllables!!!

Tiel Aisha Ansari said...

oooh, ouch. Getting scorch marks out of red velvet is _so_ hard.

susan said...

Comical. Thanks for the read.

Richard Wells said...

LOL, thanks.

gautami tripathy said...

Perfect..:D

amnesia

Jujee said...

hehe clever and funny!

Cherie said...

... can hear him ... Ho, Ho Oooooo!
Happy Holidays and Many Thanks for your kind words xxx

Anonymous said...

Great poem! I love the lighthearted mood.

little wing writer said...

geez, this was a funny and great piece...