Photos Poetry Prose
This brings out the melancholy longing which each fall brings; hearing the geese fly overhead. Lovely.
such a lovely poem, it is full of the spirit of the season.
Very nice poem, Tumblewords :-)))
so beautiful and melodic..it just rolls off of the tongue
This is wonderful. From the beginning verse to the end.
As elegant as the geese flying south...
Ooh... Persephone would like. ;)
"The melody of Persephone." Wonderful read, this. So many images in so few words. I love it!
leaves of quilts and the geese...being a quilter this stood right out....lovely..bkm
"geese stitchthe falling dusk"Thank goodness I read these lovely words twice! First time I read 'geese stitch the falling duck'! Funny image. Sorry, still laughing at my own stupidity!
"Southbound song", really got me...lovely imagery...
The sounds of southbound song... Excellent.
Beautiful words...nice poem!
"..geese stitchthe falling dusk.." Stunning line.
Made much more sense after I learned Persephone was the goddess of the harvest! :)Beautiful images of fall!
marvellous images, I am trying to get right deep down into them, to see what you are seeing.that's what poetry does to me.
I love "sweet clear sounds of southbound song"!Beautiful.Kay, Alberta
That was lovely! I too want to fly southbound. very beautiful work
lovely description of the changing seasons
Wonderfully described..fortune tellers
A lovely piece.
Loved the first para, especially. Together, it tells a story.
how peaceful a magpie...i like the persephone reference....
Your poem sounds so soothing and comforting. Such calming words!
A true magpie tale. Delightful. I am late responding but that's because I have been traveling!
This is waiting to be sung...I am humming those words...Nice Magpie...:)
Mystical and full of magic!
beautiful poem - describes Autumn perfectly
I quilted long ago and your first words made me want to reach for fabric and begin piecing it together--you captured the feeling of fall which I have always seen as a beginning--great magpie!
I can hear the "sweet clear sounds" of the "melody of Persephone"Lovely lyrical, autumn calling the birds last song before going south,simply divine...Joanny
I don't know how you do it every single time but you do. The geese stitching. I can't get over how good that is. Magnificent!
I'm too french to know what a Persephone is, but I like the sound of it. And I loved "the falling dusk to leaves of quilts"Very nice!
Oh -- this is near and dear to my heart. I love the movement into Persephone. Beautiful.
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