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Wednesday, October 06, 2010

Gogyohka for 3WW

Three Word Wednesday offers the prompt words: hint, lust, sheen





one hint arrives
by stellar sign
a lustful sheen
wraps the night
in a promise map

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A Fractal and a Gogyohka Poem.
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15 comments:

Christine said...

What an evocative piece: it feels tactile! So beautifully done.

Deborah said...

Wonderful and the image at the top of the page is just glorious!!

sandy, from gardenpath said...

Great image.

ThomG said...

I've not studied this form of poetry. You made it feel effortless, however.

Janet Lingel Aldrich said...

Two gifts in one ... a lovely poem and a new form. Very special ...

Lily Hydrangea said...

I would never guess you were prompted - you seem to make the words your own so easily!
Nicely done. Nice image too!

Susannah said...

Wonderful. :-)

jaerose said...

ooh, I love the idea of a promise map..beautifully crafted in so few words..thanks for your visit..Jae

nimaruichi said...

Hmm… the possibilities are endless. Liked the anticipation here. :)

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful!

a subtle hint

Nanka said...

A nice form of poetry revived here. Thank you for that!!

Zouxzoux said...

I agree with Lilly - your verse reads so easy and natural. Lovely.

clare said...

i am intrigued by a promise map -- really lovely

Donna Hole said...

Interesting. Almost tangible; like I could touch the promise.

Lovely.

.......dhole

senderupwords said...

Perfect. Love and Light, Sender