Outside In
cobalt
frames a fading summer
light
bleeds into the double dark
hem
holds tight the wistful vision
sun
warms wood while sinking
black
veils the inner sight
heart
takes cover from voyeurs
Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Thursday, September 09, 2010
Outside In for Magpie Tales
Magpie Tales offers the following image as this week's prompt. Thank you, Willow!
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I like it, especially "holds tight the wistful vision."
Very interesting structure. Took me a minute to follow it. Lovely poem, and yet another unique look at the picture.
Great imagery in your poems!
'Hiding from voyeurs'. Yes, that is a real need for some who wear a veil.
And we are all voyeurs... a comment on my own Magpie too, in that case looking in at insanity. Thanks for the visit.
You took every single detail of this photo and made an thoroughly engrossing story.
Because of the title, I read this forwards, backwards, sideways, outside to inside, inside to outside, right to left, left to right, and completely at random.
I must say, it was kinda fun.
Beautiful. :-)
Another brilliant style.. and helluva creative... and what bful you tumble down in your writings :) another brilliant post
This is beautiful. I like the construction of your poem - it really makes the reader think.
This, I dig. The layout is striking and fortifies the meaning. Outside in, daylight to night, a life, vibrant to dull, blossoming to withering, hope born of innocence dying to the pain of living… Well, that’s the joy I got from it, anyway : )
Sublime. I love the way you used those one-word lines.
I like it, so short and so profound
a painter's reflections on the picture. i love the structure as the single word can either be with the line before it or the line after. inventive.
Love how one stand alone word unwraps into imagery! Beautiful!
Wow! That was nice. Thanks and thanks for your comment.
nicely done. have a happy weekend.
a perfect vision, to the eye that sees nothing is hidden.
Stellar
Word play
Vivid images surround
Beautiful words, lovely images.
"..hem
holds tight the wistful vision.." Very nice.
love the last line. Great Magpie. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender
Great imagery I really liked your poem.
I especially like "heart
takes cover from voyeurs". Nice.
Awesome work! I love the structure of this piece! =)
-Weasel
love the structure of this...as with jeff i liked playing with this a bit..even reading just the single words...sun black heart...nice mag!
Wonderful imagery....great Magpie!
:-)
Imagery, structure... taking time to absorb all of it, beautiful poem.
Thank you for visiting my blog as well. Always helpful to have input.
What a joy.
I loved the way my mind just wanted to run up and down each word
tumbling.
a treat for the senses.
Rene
Different I teresti g.. You gave meaning to almost everything in the view.. Very good magpie..
Such strong imagery, and I loved the last line!
I really enjoy how you have encompassed all the visual elements, and how each forms one warm thought and vision. A comforting poem!
Rick
I love the structure of this and the image of the light bleeding into the double dark is beautiful.
Wonderfully visual without the photo. With the photo quite haunting.
I love the way you structured this--it is like having two poems in one."Veiled inner sight"-can relate to that. Wonderful, thank you.
my favourite line "bleeds the double dark hem"....great magpie..bkm
Dear Tumblewords: Brilliant! Wonderful Tumble in the words. Absolutely Perfect! Structure superlative. Excellent way you have with words, my dear!
Love this! It feels like words tumbling out of my mouth but it all makes perfect sense. Well Done!
This is breathtaking, the form and the words.
Amazing form, and quite mesmerizing.
The structure of this piece is intriguing. It works well, though I'm not totally sure why.
Amazing! I just love the tight and disciplined structure.
But I can't help peeking! Great description.
One of the best ...... a great read!
I literally can't move past the image of the cobalt bleeding. It is so beautiful. I am enchanted by it. I can see it in my mind's eye. You have given me a gift today with that image. Thank you.
I really like this!
unique, I like it.
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