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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Senryu for 3WW

Senryu for Three Word Wednesday   Thanks, ThomG!



she slackens her gait
nudges it to no-wander
winter cold ripens

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A Fractal.
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15 comments:

ThomG said...

Welcome back! There's so much to like about this haiku. Simply good.

Gel said...

Terrific haiku.
That second line is so descriptive.

haisley said...

hi there....nice haiku

Thomma Lyn said...

Awesome haiku about the coming of winter!

Collective Epiphanies said...

A beautiful Haiku rich with imagery. Thank you for commenting on mine.

Deborah said...

Wonderful!

Tanvi said...

Can relate to it! Lovely :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Well this is beautiful.. like it..

shail said...

Lovely senryu.

Geraldine said...

Indeed! I enjoyed this Sue. LOVE your new header btw.

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Greyscale Territory said...

Compact, loaded images which seem to flow like a bowling ball set for a target! Beautiful!

gautami tripathy said...

Terrific senryu!

baton of time

Andy Sewina said...

Yeah, I dig the choice of words here!

ladynimue said...

your words are always so differnt !! so alluring :)

Jingle said...

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awards for you.
Happy Tuesday!