lush sections hidden
under dry skin and wrinkles
her world passes by
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Wednesday, March 09, 2011
Senryu for Magpie Tales #56
Magpie Tales #56
lush sections hidden
under dry skin and wrinkles
her world passes by
lush sections hidden
under dry skin and wrinkles
her world passes by
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A very telling Magpie...
Oh yes ... I'm thinkin' of someone I know intimately! That would be me.
A beautiful double entendre'..lovely!!
well said,
love the hard truth of it.
Wow. Beautiful and, to me, sadly pertinent...
brilliant!
I thought it is garlic cloves?
I was going to tell you the link to thank you for giving me the idea to post the Himalayan salt lamps. Without your post, I won't have posted my photos.
Too bad for those of the world who pass her. They have no idea what they may be missing. Very lovely senryu.
Wow. I love this. It's so short and sweet and poignant. Isn't it amazing how many different magpies were inspired by this garlic?
Oh... you have done this Magpie very differently..
Smiles xx
Hey! Did you write that about me?
Garlic catches up with us all in the end.
Brilliant! Those who can see past the dry skin and wrinkles may be amply rewarded!
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
Love this!
She still has some spice in her, hasn't she? Nice!
Sue,
Until some knowing connoisseur unwraps her to experience her delights.
rel
Very neat! How many are passed by on first acquaintance?
And this one reads "layers deep"...
A very poignant read!! Ah.. the marvel in brevity..
Lovely. Very poignant.
His probably is, too.
Well written.
Pass the moisturiser, quick! LOL
I'm sure this clever metaphor could be worked up into something longer. But within the restrictions of the 5-7-5 syllable count . . very good.
clever twist- beauty and lushness under wrinkled skin- you betcha!
Dear Tumblewords: Lovely and seductive Haiku...in praise of older women and garlic-"go for it" HA-YAH!
I love this. So clever. Hope I don't see me in this poem.
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