the Marching Ides
luck-in-waiting disguised
...a phantom leaf
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Monday, March 14, 2011
Haiku for Magpie Tales #57
Magpie Tales #57 Willow weekly posts an enigmatic image to prompt writers to write. This week:
the Marching Ides
luck-in-waiting disguised
...a phantom leaf
the Marching Ides
luck-in-waiting disguised
...a phantom leaf
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29 comments:
"luck-in-waiting" = brilliant.
i've never been much good at haikus, but i can recognize madd poetry skillz when i see 'em. :)
Luck-in-waiting is so comforting. Excellent.
Great, great wordsmanship. beautifully done.
profound.
This is just so lovely.
I love it!
Beautiful Haiku and so much said. It sounds like a spooky mystery story.
Loved it immensely!!
Beautifully crafted, I like the idea of 'luck-in-waiting'.
Nice tight haiku.
NICE haiku for this image! I love:
" a phantom leaf"
Good one Tumblewords!
How appropriate - right on cue for the 15th!
Great use of putting the words disguised and phantom together. Nice.
ah, she nods
An excellent wee poem ..a phantom leaf indeed.
Ranks among the best this week ...
luck in waiting...love it!
The eye is drawn to that phantom leaf, isn't it? Happy St. Pat's to you!
This has a perfect pitch..really amazing, how much you've said!
Just a perfect sentiment!
I love your play on the Ides of March. Well done.
Is "luck-in-waiting" an everyday name for the African violet, or perhaps the shamrock?
Love this "ode to march" haiku.
I agree with so many of your readers. "Luck-in-waiting" is superb.
Poetry24…where news is the Muse
Doesn't Luck always come in a little disguised?
Love xx
But what kind of luck is waiting? Only the best, I hope!
Oooooh wowwiiees!! Dangerously dark... loved it!!
Really BEAUTIFULLY written!
luck in waiting...it is always waiting for us...bkm
Simply perfect!
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