Symphony
sweet measured spirits
breathe solo chords
beyond the face of stone
soaring notes
climb to calm the chaos
of that newest world
with a sprightly dance
they turn around,
return to the old abode
beyond the face of stone
solo chords breathe out
welcoming spirits home
Image by Willow.
Loosely adapted from "Largo
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Your words come tumbling out in a delightful lyrical verse penned nicely on paper
joanny
lovely=nicely done!
Music with us at every turn..well done!!
wonderful lines!!
Largo?
Dvorak's Largo?
Wow... I'm having flashbacks.
So lovely ... and the paiting on your header is just beautiful!
Pretty poem - nice one.
You captured the essence of the lilting, magic power of music!!!
love it.
I see your words stretch and bend here..
;)
Beautiful! I love the flow. And thank you for visiting my site!
lovely vivid imagery
Very nice.
Music welcomes spirits home - how true...
welcoming home spirits...that is what music does...lovely...bkm
Delightful, lovely piece. Can so visualize this... well done.
Your words "dance". Very enchanting.
For some reason, your words spelled out FREEDOM to me... and I loved that about the poem!
Really enjoyed your take on the Magpie! Most delightful..
Not easy turning the effect of music into words. This is a noble attempt.
Incredible, just lovely. : )
A magnificent crescendo.
This is very, very good - that last line is a winner..
This is very, very good - that last line is a winner..
The words flow out naturally. Beautifully done!
Lovely and beautiful...
"soaring notes
climb to calm the chaos"..
Loved these two lines a lot :)
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