Scraps
a road excised
from the fabric of knolls
offers unfurled curves
like fortunes from a cookie
ardent red tree trunks
favor no-man's land
below the crystal ceiling
with one foot in the mire
and yet it's there
she chose to wander
on that road excised
from fabric of the knolls
Watercolor header.
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And we all choose which road to walk...
Beautifully done.
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Very Beautiful and I would like some tea for that journey. Heck I want tea for every journey.
"...from the fabric of knolls..." So creative and just gorgeous!
Oh so perfect. What a web you spin Sue, lovely!
Hugs, G
www.myreallifereviews.com
I loved the internal almost-rhyme (unfurled curls).
Exquisite piece. Love the pulling of colors, threading into the knolls, like those of a comgy quilt.
love the "fabric from the knolls" rolls right off the tongue...ah..beautiful...thank you...bkm
This rolls in loveliness from the tongue.
Perfect wanderings on your road through the fabric of knolls.
You are very good with words.
simply lovely- the roads we choose
An intricately woven journey. There are so many choices in life.
I love this! I smiled when you compared the curves of the road to fortunes from a cookie. That's so perfect! And thank you for visiting my blog!
The fabric of knolls. I love that.
Great piece, loved it.
A lovely read, beautifully crafted.
This was lovely and I LOVE your watercolors. How beautiful.
Mysterious and compelling with interesting contrasts of language sharp with excised crystal, and soft with all the "l" and "ur" sounds..I am liking it much.
she blazed her own trail, wove her own way :)
I followed this one to the end
loveing every word
reads aloud very nicely
"ardent red tree trunks
favor no-man's land"
Simple.. beautiful....
God Bless
A lovely fantasy in the snowy wood.
I love the words you've chosen for this! (Love the header too) :)
Wonderful words written with such depth and awesome thoughts.
zeroing into the arrow
..."crystal ceiling". Perfect. I also love your painting at the top of your blog. Did you paint it?
it's quite magical... choosing and where we might go... lovely...
Oh woww... this was really well done, my friend!! That 2nd stana left me thinking and thinking... very well written indeed!
Laced with a degree of mysticism, this was a very realistic take on the magpie...
Bravo!!!
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