Leaf of Summer
a loose leaf
lifted by the wind
landed on the pond
caught by camera lens...
lightly treading water
This gogyohka poetry form is explained at http://www.fivelinepoetry.com/ I'm quite fond of short and easy poetry like captured snippets of thoughts.
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30 comments:
love it!
smart poem!
So beautiful poetry, I love Autumn season with all lovely colours and leaves!
Léia
I'm glad you didn't just Leave it there, but Let us Love it too.
Nice tumbling of words, Tumblewords!
What a wonderful capture it is...
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Lovely and so true and what a beautiful, colorful leaf! Delightful post for the L Day! Enjoy your week!
Sylvia
Lovely, and it looks so graceful.
short yet effective for sure :) lovely L post! and a new form for me to try sometime!
My ABC Wednesday L
I like your captured snippets of thoughts too.
You said it all in just a few short words. Excellent.
So excited for this new form! I am going to try it... love what you say AND love the image of the leaf. I wrote a poem earlier today that I titled "Look under the leaves."
So grateful to read your words today!
L is for Longing
What a sweet post. I love the way you have expressed your thought.
You keep revealing to me (us) about all these forms of short poetry. I had no idea and I love all these formats.
Wow. Love the leaf shot too. It's amazing!
Lovely words, lovely poem. A
That picture is so light and luminescent! Beautiful post...
I counted six "l" words - so concise and beautiful!
Lovely leaf, and a new word for me to learn. What more could I ask from the letter L ? (It is also my middle initial.)
Kay, Alberta
The rhythm of the breeze is in your gogyohka. The leaf looks as though it has wings.
"all the leaves are brown, and the sky is gray" - a certain melancholy comes w autumn
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
What lovely poetry, and the picture so perfect.
short but meaningful poem..love it
Simple, but so appropriate.
A golden leaf that waves good bye to summer! Hello wet autumn!
Loved the short simple 5-liner.
Lovely leaf and poem. Great take on the letter L.
As long as it is a summer leaf it's OK, I don't like autumn, lol!
Gattina from the ABC team
Beautifully stated and a lovely photo to go with the words.
I haven't heard of that kind of poem. Gorgeous shot and love the poem as well!
I love that photo and your poetry is beautiful. I like the short form too.
You've conveyed the fragility!
so well written !
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