Archer's Target
A red, orange and yellow swirl of curl soothes the restless sky where Archer hides while soaring colors dance and wave with thermal loops. linen string
with bright baited tail
bound to earth
The bobbin spins meters of freedom before gravity gives in and the swirl continues its final flight.
sand footprints
plaster of paris
trail of tears
A fractal image.
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21 comments:
I like the images in your haibun! Nice work.
Wonderful. Just how I see kites .My computer screen wallpaper is a photo I took of my son's kite above a local beach. I cropped son out of the picture, to leave the kite as focus.
Your fractals are fabulous, too.
Wonderful. Just how I see kites .My computer screen wallpaper is a photo I took of my son's kite above a local beach. I cropped son out of the picture, to leave the kite as focus.
Your fractals are fabulous, too.
Many layers in almost every image, disturbing and fascinating at the same time.
Best wishes
Ralf
the last lines cut out a brilliant imagery !! :)
Well crafted, great images.
your poetry is so visual, and your image is so beutifully peotic
Breaking the bounds of earth, in spirit if not in fact! Great images.
Beautiful images Susan!
Pamela
Both Magpie and Haibun are excellent once again.
You make it look so easy.
Excellent images presented! Wonderfully crafted post! =)
-Weasel
Hi Sue,
I have been enjoying catching up with your poetry this evening. Always a delight.
Sometimes when I come to visit I will make a note or two. Tonight I made ten! I do not know the Haibun form.
I shall look it up.
Your word paintings have left me smiling tonight.
Thanks!
Sherry
simply beautiful!
Fractals-- what a creative take on the prompt!
Wonderful haibun. And of course, your haiku excel as always.
Haibun: seedy deeds
Trail of years! Lovely...both image and poem
I love fractals, it is so easy to just get pulled in and stay for a while. Which is much how I felt while reading your words. Good response to the prompt,
Elizabeth
I loved your "J" is for jello and am already sweating over "k."
The fractals seem so interesting. I need to learn about them.
I saw just this when I was at the beach this week! Your spare words captured it perfectly!
I'm intrigued by the way you used the idea of a journey here. It's a very distinctive take.
Your poetry is so different. I have read many American poetry and well, yours sound like Shakespeare's. Most of the time I don't understand half of what the artist is trying to say without pausing to analyze. Forgive me, I am new to this stuff, but enjoying the word mystery. Smiles.
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