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Good combination of prompts - THREE birds with one stone...!
love the word play in this.
I especially liked the wording "gentle mentors not so much", relevant in so many contexts. The intensity in this short form invites many interpretations, especially juxtaposed next to that tiny humble purple flower!
gentle mentors...much/hunch...I love the sounds of the words you chose as well.
Yeah like the word play, play/hunch great use of the prompts.Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge? this week!!
Wow, the word play here is excellent, and so is the imagery! Great job working in all of the prompts. :)
I had not heard about the Irish girl committing suicide because of bullying when I wrote my 3ww piece. It's beyond comprehension that not one person helped this girl.
My MENTOR is very gentle...I like the photo.
The flower is lovely! I found it in deep contrast to your poem. It's heartbreaking. I did not associate it with that little Irish girl but I could see it.
This is thought-provoking. Structurally, I love the way you combined 3WW, Sunday Scriblings, NaiSaiKu and rhyme. Philosophically, you got me thinking about mentors and harsh vs gentle. I might have to go mull this over a bit.
You've captured more in that than just 3 prompts :-)Excellent.
wonderful combo of memes :)Merciless Mentor
Oh. For pity's sake this is about mentors because this is a triple post. I need to slow down and think.This is a perfect "poem" about mentors. Perfect!
What a clever use of words! A delight.
The abundance of "C' words in this post gave it a cruel yet so effective punch.
first time here.I liked the way you played around with the words in those lines:)
Love the words, and very cleverly done!
'Caustic hunch..caustic play'.. I love those words. Such weight..thanks for your visit..Jae
agree with the others! i love that you were able to do three things here! wonderful.
Packed a punch for 3! Enjoyed the word play.
Thought provoking and a creative combo of prompts.Lovely flower photo, too!
Every word packs a punch. I didn't know about the girl--heartbreaking. Thanks for visiting my site. Kate
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