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Thursday, April 22, 2010

NaiSaiKu for 3WordWednesday

ThomG, moderator of Three Word Wednesday, offers the following three for prompt:  random, negotiate, ebb and I respond with a NaiSaiKu.





random brainwaves ebb
negotiate for new space
opened by daylight
double down with shady plans
opened by daylight
negotiate for new space
random brainwaves ebb

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Fractal image created with Apophysis software.
 
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15 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...

Beautiful image of shady plans being opened by daylight! Fascinating poem!

anthonynorth said...

It's how it works. Nicely explained.

Andy Sewina said...

Love the first and last line, and that word 'brainwaves'.

pia said...

Feels as if my brainwaves are random and ebbing while trying to find space

Totally rrelatable to the later middle aged brain

Dee Martin said...

"double down with shady plans" love that and the fractal is gorgeous!

Stan Ski said...

A teacher I know once described his profession as 'shovelling daylight into dark corners'

Jay Thurston said...

I like this, it reminded me of the inevitable feeling of losing your dreams in progress when waking up. Not three seconds of consciousness and the random brainwave has ebbed.

That could be my interpretation because I just read this after my dogs woke me up a bit early this morning.

Excellent, one of my favorites I have seen of this style!

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

amazing !!!

i love the repetition of the lines giving a different meaning to the same line....

ThomG said...

love the double-down part. Great stuff.

But I think I want to challenge you to get out of your comfort zone and try some flash fiction. I'd be interested to see what you do with the genre.

geeta said...

It was nicely done...loved reading it

aspiemom said...

Even though you've used the same words, that middle sentence gives everything new meaning.

Well done!

aspiemom said...

Even though you've used the same words, that middle sentence gives everything new meaning.

Well done!

Bobbie Sandlin said...

VERY nice! Lovely flow and I love the theme to this. Beautiful fractal!

Vivek said...

The form has brought out the mysterious nature of these lines very well.

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

I like this form; it's a new one I've never seen before. Might be fun to play with.