Magpie Tales offers an image for prompt. It can be viewed at the site by clicking on the link.
Measured
echoes of time
vintage spiritsand wounded trees
a breath of prayer
badgers the shabbiness
of this distant home
where fragile bones
on bending knees
offered the kiss of life
caged by glass
songs rise from ashes
echo that other time
Digital photo by Sue.
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21 comments:
Loved this! Beautiful interpretation of the prompt!
you are absolutely amazing! your poetry is perfect and beautiful,
The rhythm of this is rolling and beautiful; it complements the images nicely. Well done!
"caged by glass
songs rise from ashes"
lovely.
Breath of prayer badgering the shabbiness is an incredible image. Outstanding poem!
What a beautiful fragile thing.
"vintage spirits and wounded trees" Almost a primeval song of nature. Each word carefully chosen.
intriguing take on the prompt, very different from the others. beautiful in its simplicity.
You have chosen a good name . . as your words tumble over themselves in a thing of beauty.
Evokes dark and ancient thoughts. Lovely.
Incredible and profound.
Wonderful poem -- loved the ending,
Joanny
Dear Tumblewords: How I love your evocative Fractal poetry. I want to try Fractalizing! I will try! Next Magpie! Measured like distant echoes from long past yet still reverberating eons of time. Amazing! Thank-you!!!
Lovely - I like how you captured the vintage essence of the painting.
your words carry such vivid imagery...so nicely done.
I really like the "songs rising from the ashes" line.
Kat
How beautiful. I took me a minute or two to move away from the richness of the first stanza. I look forward to exploring your blog.
Beautiful -- love the title -- an interesting take on the prompt -- love the essence of your poem
Joanny
"Songs rise from ashes" is evocative of the Phoenix being reborn. Lovely.
Absolutely beautiful images!
This is so beautiful. There is so much of tenderness and fragility in your poem.
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