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Wednesday, February 03, 2010

NaiSaiKu for 3WW

ThomG, moderator for 3WordWednesday, offers these words as prompt: odor, frantic, lurch.
For fun, this NaiSaiKu...




the first frantic lurch
from the cafeteria door
he breathed in deeply
the dreaded spinach odor
not so deep he breathed
from the cafeteria door
second frantic lurch









Fractal image was created in Apophysis, edited in Irfanview.

My Poem, Dark Clusters, is now published in Flutter at http://rarepetal.webs.com/volume5issue2.htm

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10 comments:

Stan Ski said...

This is a very unhappy childhood memory for me... School Canteen Blues.
Good NaiSaiKu, though.

ThomG said...

Clever, very clever. (I always kinda liked that smell...)

anthonynorth said...

Sometimes you just have to get away :-)
Enjoyed this.

peggy said...

I still every once in a while, with no cafeteria reference, smell that odor.

never thought it would work its way into art.

Loved the fractal image.

Crybbe666 said...

We didn't have school cafeteria's when I went to school. Kind of glad now!
Loved the image as well, great job!

bunnygirl said...

Huh. I rather like spinach, as long as it's not from a can. :-)

Just someone said...

"dreaded spinach odor" :)

that is true; no matter how good it is, it does seem to hv that odor, eh?:)

Great great NaiSaiKu!

Jay Thurston said...

Spinach, an acquired taste. I remember loathing spinach as a kid. This poem captures the school cafe memory clearly. Fun poem!

Wendy Naisa said...

Yeah, this is fun! Love the fractal... what a lurch!!

Many thanks for posting to the NaiSaiku Challenge?

aka Andy Sewina

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Oh wow...you brought back some childhood memories for me! Those dreaded cafeteria smells wafting through my nose!