one shining beacon
unity in kindred peace
the vision-less grieve
they divide by rant and rave
the vision-less grieve
reject the kindred peace
our beacon shining
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great stuff.
Oh, those divisions get us every time.
Excellently done.
Phew, rejecting the kindred peace...
Love how well you do this!
aka Andy Sewina
There's always one...sometimes more...
Nicely done and very apt.
Nicely done and very apt.
Brilliant
Wonderfully put together. A fine job. Enjoy your week every week!
I like this, especially the part "divide by rant and rave." Nice job!
Is this "where there is no vision the people perish"?
http://gildorianne.blogspot.com/2010/01/three-word-wednesday-haiku.html
this writing has a see saw affect of emotions. Complex but simple. I like it.
Love the poem. Interesting use of repetition, with changing nuances to the meaning. So true too.
The image is great too - looks like light bouncing off the wall, repetition like the poem, with nowhere to go.
once again, I love this form and how you incorporated the 3WW. Great poem. :-)
Look! I finally made it! I love this piece. I don't know if its the repetition that drives it home or what exactly but I really do like it!
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good one again :)
Very clever, I like this form of poetry. Well written!
Wonderful use of the prompt words....i thought it was repetition but its not.Good one.
thanks for that call to peace and higher vision. petty aspects can pull down one or all.
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