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Memorable words. Excellent as always.
this just had a great feel to it while reading it.
WonderfulWords, I can hardly remember what happened yesterday, and the more I try to recall the further I fall..Thanks for posting this!
Sounds like somebody is under a bit of pressure and trying to sweep the past under the carpet - it must be aimed at a polititian(s).
So cleverly done...a swapping of the words evolves the poem and its meaning. Wonderful!
I adored how you phrased this... I could almost feel my own memory slipping as each moment winked out of existence...
this is wonderful!
I like the repetition of "memory is small." So true of human nature. Or perhaps it would be more appropriate to say we remember the wrong things. Teetering ideals, indeed.
Loved the rhythm of this. I will take a look at Naisaiku rules. I learn something everytime I visit here.b
I like the symmetry of this poetry format. Well written... and creating use of the words!
This is a very interesting way to use the prompt words. Great job!Never Centered
I love that your poem is all about ideals, memory, angst - and your fractal looks like a brain :)
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Oh, this was splendid! Really liked the way you used the words...you make it seem so easy.
very nice and perfect in form! Thanks for sharing it! :-)
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