ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday offers these words for prompt: yearn, sweet, collapse
confined yearn
unwinds sweet at night
bumps daylight
meets full blown collapse
bumps daylight
rewinds sweet at night
confined yearn
unwinds sweet at night
bumps daylight
meets full blown collapse
bumps daylight
rewinds sweet at night
confined yearn
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This builds really well, with some great images. I like it.
Great job with Naisuki (is it spelled right) and I love the picture.
this is wonderful!! I love 'bumps daylight.'
What a great naisaiku. Bumps daylight is a wonderful image. Sensual writing at its best. Hope all is well.
I think you've used the structure to great effect here.
awww... neat and nice :)
My 3WW
This 3 word challenge is really hard.
You have put it so well.
Totally rocks!
I. Love the repetition.
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This has an interesting collage/abstract feel to it. I felt like I almost but not quite knew what it was about. Just like the picture. Very nice.
An ingenious image displayed in this.
Marvellous.
Wow! Bumps daylight! What a great image, it takes me 'on tour' inside the pinball machine!!
Thanks for taking The NaiSaiku Challenge?
your words capture passion very well.
I get this! It is a really good one -- meets full blown collapse was a great pivot.
that image is really cool.. and you know i love the way you write that form...
I am immediately 'uummph' at the confined yearn - I have difficulty with confined anything!
And then it unwinds and rewinds...
Thank you
lovely...can't say enough how great you use this poetic poem
Our true desires find a lively playground in our minds in the middle of the night, don't they?
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