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Thursday, July 16, 2009

Poem for Totally Optional Prompts

Totally Optional Prompts offers a selection of 'randoms'.






Incoming

through a rust storm
glowering
from the belt of production
black mice shrug

guttural as growling crows
robins gossip through gloom
to a wine stained rose
shaking dew from her heart

the banality of daily chaos
covers thinning backsacks
on those who missed the sign
of the first blinking lights

Image was created on Bamboo Fun Tablet with Adobe Photoshop Elements, resized in Irfanview.




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13 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

You've used the prompt well. I enjoyed your poem today, as always. Vivid imagery at play. Hope all is well. Have a great day.

blushing rose said...

Simply wonderful. TTFN ~Marydon

Andy Sewina said...

Yeah, I like the way you managed to use so many of the prompt images.

Stan Ski said...

You conjure up stunning images here.

irene said...

Wonderful imagery and I like how you end it.

Kuan Gung said...

Very nice...

anthonynorth said...

Very nicely done. I only managed two of the images.

Linda Jacobs said...

You've got some great lines in here! I especially love the "wine stained rose" and the "banality of daily chaos." You are so good with words!

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Sue, great take om the prompt. Your images are clear and sharp. Well done.


love, Melanie

C. R. Stone said...

"robins gossip through gloom
to a wine stained rose
shaking dew from her heart"
Love the image here. Another awesome
write!

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful poem!

dragon rider

Jane Doe said...

So descriptive with vibrant, creative imagery. You are very gifted with words.

Whitesnake said...

Image, imagery seems ta be the favourite word here.....

I thought it was marvellous and indicative of your talent as a writer and a person of beauty.

By the way slap the bugga who spilt the wine on the rose.
What a waste!