Incoming
through a rust storm
glowering
from the belt of production
black mice shrug
guttural as growling crows
robins gossip through gloom
to a wine stained rose
shaking dew from her heart
the banality of daily chaos
covers thinning backsacks
on those who missed the sign
of the first blinking lights
Image was created on Bamboo Fun Tablet with Adobe Photoshop Elements, resized in Irfanview.
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You've used the prompt well. I enjoyed your poem today, as always. Vivid imagery at play. Hope all is well. Have a great day.
Simply wonderful. TTFN ~Marydon
Yeah, I like the way you managed to use so many of the prompt images.
You conjure up stunning images here.
Wonderful imagery and I like how you end it.
Very nice...
Very nicely done. I only managed two of the images.
You've got some great lines in here! I especially love the "wine stained rose" and the "banality of daily chaos." You are so good with words!
Sue, great take om the prompt. Your images are clear and sharp. Well done.
love, Melanie
"robins gossip through gloom
to a wine stained rose
shaking dew from her heart"
Love the image here. Another awesome
write!
Wonderful poem!
dragon rider
So descriptive with vibrant, creative imagery. You are very gifted with words.
Image, imagery seems ta be the favourite word here.....
I thought it was marvellous and indicative of your talent as a writer and a person of beauty.
By the way slap the bugga who spilt the wine on the rose.
What a waste!
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