ounce of trust
speeds on tiny wings
hummingbird
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hawks rotate
dive a down spiral
...lomcevak
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warm spring
validates
tulip trust
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his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens
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newborn trust
not a dram of fear
...turns cynic
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Sunday Scribblings offers trust as the weekly prompt.
The image is a fractal created in Fractal Explorer.
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24 comments:
Loved all the lines here...
esp. the lines....
his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens
Good goin!
Trust in balance in many of those. The true way to trust.
Last one is my favourite :)
The third Haiku does it for me - and the image.
To be able to distill such meaning into so few words must require a very special talent--and you certainly possess that talent!
Exquisite writing.
This is the first time I have ever seen the word lomcevak in a poem. I don't even think Czechs can manage that. Well done.
A five-act play on trust: apparently simple, but strong stuff, sends the heart reeling... lomcevak.
Amazing how many trust images you have here. Really enjoyed!
Amazing how many trust images you have here. Really enjoyed!
Great Haiku! This is one writing media I have never mastered, but you've done an excellent job!
Loved all of these tumbles. Love your blog name.
These are beautiful, all. I'm with with nairobi on my favorite: her sun darkens: gorgeous.
Trust—so easy for nature, so terribly hard for the human brain—maddening! : )
You've managed to cover it all! Especially enjoyed "his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens"
Beautiful, yet sad visual!
Hugs Giggles
succinct and witty...yes, I've seen the orb darken. Well-written.
Loved the 'tulip trust' ;)
newborn trust ... turns cynic --- all too true, but oh so sad - where have all the flowers gone, long time passing???
your words just Dance off my screeen!
so creative!
i like dark so of course this is my favorite:
his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens
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like how you use orb with sun!
Ahhhh... the spectrum of trust across the continuum of life. Well done Sue :)
Peace,
JP/deb
Nice range of emotion played throughout.
You're the third OSI person I've seen participating in Sunday Scribblings, looks like an interesting meme. I particularly like the first verse, about the hummingbird.
I like the haiku about the hawk. I also like the art you post.
Wonderful poems.
You're very talented.
The last piece of work is so true.
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