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Saturday, February 21, 2009

Trust for Sunday Scribblings





ounce of trust
speeds on tiny wings
hummingbird

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hawks rotate
dive a down spiral
...lomcevak

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warm spring
validates
tulip trust

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his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens

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newborn trust
not a dram of fear
...turns cynic

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Sunday Scribblings offers trust as the weekly prompt.

The image is a fractal created in Fractal Explorer.


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24 comments:

nairobi said...

Loved all the lines here...
esp. the lines....
his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens

Good goin!

anthonynorth said...

Trust in balance in many of those. The true way to trust.

Jeeves said...

Last one is my favourite :)

Dave King said...

The third Haiku does it for me - and the image.

Marguerite said...

To be able to distill such meaning into so few words must require a very special talent--and you certainly possess that talent!

Exquisite writing.

myrtle beached whale said...

This is the first time I have ever seen the word lomcevak in a poem. I don't even think Czechs can manage that. Well done.

anno said...

A five-act play on trust: apparently simple, but strong stuff, sends the heart reeling... lomcevak.

Gordon Mason said...

Amazing how many trust images you have here. Really enjoyed!

Gordon Mason said...

Amazing how many trust images you have here. Really enjoyed!

Bobbi said...

Great Haiku! This is one writing media I have never mastered, but you've done an excellent job!

Donna Marino said...

Loved all of these tumbles. Love your blog name.

murat11 said...

These are beautiful, all. I'm with with nairobi on my favorite: her sun darkens: gorgeous.

missalister said...

Trust—so easy for nature, so terribly hard for the human brain—maddening! : )

Giggles said...

You've managed to cover it all! Especially enjoyed "his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens"
Beautiful, yet sad visual!

Hugs Giggles

Lilibeth said...

succinct and witty...yes, I've seen the orb darken. Well-written.

Devil Mood said...

Loved the 'tulip trust' ;)

danni said...

newborn trust ... turns cynic --- all too true, but oh so sad - where have all the flowers gone, long time passing???

Lucy said...

your words just Dance off my screeen!
so creative!

floreta said...

i like dark so of course this is my favorite:
his betrayal
pricks an orb of trust
her sun darkens
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like how you use orb with sun!

JP/deb said...

Ahhhh... the spectrum of trust across the continuum of life. Well done Sue :)

Peace,
JP/deb

Jeff B said...

Nice range of emotion played throughout.

Sue said...

You're the third OSI person I've seen participating in Sunday Scribblings, looks like an interesting meme. I particularly like the first verse, about the hummingbird.

AdellBeek said...

I like the haiku about the hawk. I also like the art you post.

Jill said...

Wonderful poems.

You're very talented.

The last piece of work is so true.