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Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Clean and Repeat









impulse laid a feast
too bountiful to eat

with candid words
he confronts the deceit

of those moldy days
when snake-oil risk

replaced the nectar
of the gods, where

fraud bit into dreams
too plenteous to eat



ThomG, moderator of Three Word Wednesday offers the following words as prompt: Candid, Impulse, Risk





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12 comments:

Ackworth born said...

thank you for these words
now it is time to hit the sack

night night

Noah the Great said...

Good!

TJ said...

interesting....three words.
That is tuff.
I think you have descibe deceit.
TJ

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

I hear a strong voice here!

The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

Jeeves said...

Fraud bit. Wow!!!!Like this one

Lucy said...

nice one Sue! :)

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

A little poem for our times.

pjd said...

I'm not entirely sure I understand it the way you meant it, but if I do then I like it very much.

lissa said...

I like how it reads, it just slips off the tongue so easily, also dreamlike

storyteller said...

this resonates on so many levels this morning
Hugs and blessings,

ThomG said...

Great stuff. It really flows well. Thanks for the good wishes, BTW. Still not myself - wish I could breath - but getting there.

Heather said...

This one makes you think. Love it!