worn Levis, black hair
VO5’d to a duck tail
sleeve stiff with Camels
tattoos exposed
slack-kneed stroll
teasing fight-hungry fists
every mother’s warning
every father’s fear
naif that I am
you could have
your way with me
you and your devil’s laugh
Totally Optional Prompts offers an aubade form as the challenge for this week. Mine is not so much.
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Thursday, February 12, 2009
A Devil’s Laugh
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12 comments:
Everyone loves a bad boy...parents nightmare indeed. Love the first stanza as well as the picture you've chosen for the poem. Great write.
Fell for him, did ya? My sister actually did have a guy like this, I was too young then!
and why not?? every woman loves a bad boy.......
Phew, those were the days, and so vividly recalled here! WonderfulWords!
Heres a 'funny' for you - How can you call yourself a vegetarian and smoke Camel cigarettes?
Yep, the girls all go for that guy and then are disappointed when she grows up and he never does. She ends up abused, pregnant, and hopeless.
Oh, yeah, I'd fall for him, too!
You described him so clearly!
Love it!
Whoa! Cool to the extreme. Best one I've read yet!
Haha, I like him!!!!Really nice one :D
I loved the unconventional style.And thanks for visiting deepteshpoetry. Will look forward 2 ur comments in the future.
Ah, the bad boys. I've heard of them.
Great! Just great!
enthrall
Too bad I'm not a bad boy.
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