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lavender
browned by winter ice
evokes green
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five months passed
summer heats the yard
hot wind blows
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bare feet touching earth
exposed legs stockpile suntan
I remember this
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Haiku Friday offers: Gone, but not forgotten.
ABC Wednesday post is on my Art Blog
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Friday, January 23, 2009
Gone, but not Forgotten ~ Haiku
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15 comments:
This is nice!
This is really pretty. I love "stockpiles suntan."
Very nice haikus! And the lavendar is still beautiful. Mine is all gone.
I can almost smell the lavender! I love the last line. :)
lovely.
and then when someone tells you that you have only seen as many summers as you have years of life,, it seems like it cannot possibly be true......
I've got to go for the first one. It, too, evokes green.
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My thanks to you for all the pleasure your blog has given me to date.
Dave
The last part is particularly cute.
Sue this is so delicate and lovely. You really know how to paint with words.
love-bd
Just lovely. Thanks for sharing it. And thanks for your visit to my blog. It's nice to (virtually) meet you.
Excellent - as always.
I love the first 'ku. It's lovely. <3
I enjoyed all three.
And I'm sorry it took me forever to respond to you, but thank you for visiting my poetry site! :)
Lotus
Very pretty and what a lovely poem! Thank you for your blog comment regarding my hair cut!
I like the last one best!
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