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Wednesday, January 21, 2009

At Last, First Dance







strengthening resolve
humble carries the first dance
cadence of that day





3ww Wednesday and ThomG offer these words as prompt for today: Cadence, Humble, Resolve. He says: The idea is to take the words, craft something and let the world critique it. I invite everyone to play along.


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14 comments:

floreta said...

i like your haiku, especially your use of the word humble.

Fledgling Poet said...

Beautiful and elegant, just like the watercolor painting...

ThomG said...

Very fluid; a great read.

Noelle said...

lovely!

Marianne H. Nielsen said...

I love haiku and the pictures it nestles in my head. Yours was lovely.

Linda Jacobs said...

I see a shy kid finally having the courage to ask that pretty girl to dance. Really pretty!

Noah the Great said...

Lovely use of words, as always. :D

Pretty Me!! said...

nice usage of words !!

watermaid said...

There are many ways of interpreting this.

UL said...

Beautiful, I missed reading you too...the current state of the economy doesn't leave much room for being creative, but I see that you are keeping up...hope to be back, participating on a regular basis again, one can always hope right? :)

pjd said...

I'm remembering Barack and Michelle on stage at the Neighborhood Ball on Tuesday night. I'm not sure that's the image you meant to invoke, but that's what I got.

one more believer said...

yes, as pjd i too thought of the first dance between the two who now reside in the white house and what a long way it was to get there... refreshing as was the dance... etta james at last

Jeeves said...

Brilliant. Words flowed so well!!!!

angel said...

Love the way you used the words this time!