Tumblewords

Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor

Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Baby's Plea





I don't wanna grin
quit cooing in my face
lay me down, walk away
I'll stretch, nap awhile
it's too hot to bear your heat
voices loud, colors strong
milk's too warm, dog sheds hair
lay me down, walk away
I need some space, a little air



Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, edited in Irfanview.

Skittles at Heads or Tails offers the prompt: HEADS - "Loud"
Make any kind of post using "Loud" as your prompt. You can either use the word itself or post about something that IS loud. Come play along...

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13 comments:

Geraldine said...

Ahhhh...this is so sweet! I love your painting too. What talent you have Sue, thanks for sharing with all of us.

HUGS, G

Skittles said...

I just walked into my PC room to check my email and I saw you'd signed in. I look forward to your posts every week.

The poem is so cute. I bet a lot of babies would say that if they could talk.

Shoot.. I think some adults would, too. :)

paisley said...

i l-o-v-e it!!! how adorable... don't you just wonder what they are thinking of how we act around them sometimes??????

b said...

I felt like I had crawled into the mind of a baby!

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Tricia said...

Fabulous, I can truly believe babies must think this all the time.

Noah the Great said...

I hate babies. I hate kids. I'm sure the hate is mutual. xDDD

Sue said...

Interesting perspective! I bet this is exactly how we think as wee ones :)

Tricia said...

Thank you for the complement on my blog background. I made it using Tierazon a free fractal program.

Tina said...

you speak like i feel sometimes! lovely way to get your point across ;)

anthonynorth said...

Having aided in the weening of 7 babies, spot on! :-)

forgetfulone said...

I just love your poetry and images.

Baba's Blog .. Babies Are Special said...

Wow.. thanks for this lovely poem on what a baby may be thinking..

Patsy said...

That is a great poem --- I wonder how many times a baby has felt that way --- Well done.