Michelle at Poefusion says:
Friday 5 is a collection of five words which can be found each week (middle column) on this page. If you choose to write a poem or story with these words please leave your comment below.
The words with which she challenged this week are:
birse
jounce
sike
throstle
griseous
Thanks, Michelle!
And I don't know about you, but I wonder where she finds them. My response follows:
♥
As the Sun Drops
her muted warble
enclosed in sparse bent grass
edging the pasture sike,
a griseous leggy throstle
jounced in birse ~
with no sense of dread
without a feel for end
♥
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Where does she find them indeed!
This works very nicely, though I find "griseous leggy throstle" is a bit of a mouthful! The last two lines are very powerful and end it beautifully.
Wonderful words - I'm going to be busy with my dictionary! Don't they have a marvelousl Lewis Carroll feel to them?!
I like the rthymn and it's trickly to read but I like it
Great going. I couldn't attempt any!
Love the sense of freedom you've conveyed. And, who wouldn't love to see the throstle jounce in the grass, listen to it's beautiful voice? Nice job. Have a nice weekend.
i am with you,, lost in the translation.......
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