Tumblewords

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Friday, September 19, 2008

Flight


Friday 5 is a collection of five words which can be found each week at Poefusion. Michelle always offers an outstanding collection of words! This week:

flivver
fricative
frowsy
fledgling
farl


My response is a Pleiades poem:




flight

first dawn found her footloose
frowsy and feeling low
fleeing in a topless
flivver while outcrying
fricatives ~ joined by brown
fledglings roused from nests to
follow her trail of farl


5 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

Tumblewords, this is beautiful. I can picture those birds following that trail of scone easily. Thanks for giving the Pleiades a try. Have a nice day.

Carole said...

Inventive, flowing and great fun! You've done a great job, creating an image with this form.

Greyscale Territory said...

This sounds like a wonderful, poetic introduction to a high flying mysterious romance! Great poem!

paisley said...

frolicking in fun.....

lelablonde said...

I like you plediades. Now I need to try one. Footloose is very descriptive. :) I stayed long. Go short! Go Short!