Michelle at Poefusion Friday 5 offers the following five words for this week's prompt.
fatigue
embroidery
secluded
monotonous
thaw
My response:
♥
embroidery on full boughs
late-autumn rime
settles on secluded pines
fatigue, the monotonous
cousin of the ennui tribe,
shawls her shoulders
snowbound, she dreams hunger
dreams of sugar dusted gems
in the rum cake set out to thaw
dreams of going home
dreams of the spring ferry
coming to reclaim her
♥
fractals
6 comments:
late-autumn rime
settles on secluded pines
A beautiful portrait painted :)
I like the story told and the flow of your poem. I feel wanting and hope while reading it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Beautiful. Especially like the first two stanzas. You always capture such wonderful images on your blog. Have a nice day.
I gasped when I saw the fractal. It is fantastic.
Always your poetry speaks to me.
You paint with words pictures in my mind.
Thank you.
Sherry
I like the third part, dreaming of spring while in winter
the subtle movement of seasons and life move in a passionate song of words.. and of course, the fractal shines bright!!!
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