Moved by Wings of Wright
shuttling between good
and somebody's bad
carried by wings that rumble
from sameness and back
where mobius mirrors
false prophets of forever
into a galaxy exploding
over one land imploding
while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers
I'm carried between old stars
and new pinlights of earth
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I appreciate the title and the lands exploding and imploding. A powerful poem.
Nice imagery and power in these words.
"where mobius mirrors
false prophets of forever
into a galaxy exploding
over one land imploding
while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers..."
you said it, girl. them's mighty fine tumbling words.
while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers
I'm carried between old stars
oh this is me.... but i am usually lost in the old movie trailers!!!!!!
powerful imagery, great read, made my imagination expolde
Flight. They really started something there...but the space tumbling you do leaves my head spinning. . . all out of my orbit.
Your writing moves like a dance full of strength and truth. I like the feel and am in awe of the way you express in this piece!
Yes, Idaho and NW MT, we be experiencing much the same weather.
Loved hearing from you.
Outstanding imagery and all in process, ever-changing.
Wings that rumble - nice imagery.
As usual, a deep collection and combination of words that speak volumes!! Wonderful!
I love your imagery and word choice. My SS is posted now.
Just when i think It can't get any better it does.
The imaginative impulse perfectly done!
Your imagery is amazing! Thanks for stopping by Spatter...
Very powerful with incredible imagery.
Very powerful as always, I could see it all!
your tumble words are always amazing. :)
Powerful images full of force and wonder. Thanks Tumblewords.
Great launch from the prompt! Love the brilliant departure from the norm. The imagery is excellent, and the fractal is fascinating.
Blessings,
Linda - Nickers and Ink
ON GUARD, at Nickers and Ink
What a good post for compose. Very enjoyable.
vivid imagery - I like it very much!
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